Chapters 75-76 are probably the only chapters I'll come back to here.
I just had to, so here's my personal yapping:
Our FL, most of the time, was too flawless that the implied "flaws" fell flat because she was just written to be this all too perfect and loveable existence in this timeline. I get that she deserves all the best but this makes for an uninteresting story. To add, we could've had a few more chapters dedicated to her friendship with the other cast to build context of her development, but nope.
Moreover, everyone's emotions, purpose, scenes, and actions HEAVILY depended or served only the FL. That's what I feel, makes this monotonous. The author disregarded the better supporting characters and left them underutilized.
Anw, I get that the couple were "destined" but their romance was a tedious read. Scrolling thru their panels together was tiring because the chemistry felt forced. I'm not even assured that Dylan will love his children because we weren't given enough personality development to assume this for the future.
I love happy endings, but the ending was executed weakly and briskly; causing the impact of the positive message of the story to be lost. And the epilogue, sadly only served the two main characters well.
And regrettably, my boi Kihu was simply regarded as collateral damage; used, then thrown on the ground, and stomped on. The pure disrespect to his character, I am speechless.
Gorgeous illustrations but the writing, especially in terms of character building, became a huge miss. The conflicts felt merely decorative; written for the sake of. The FL and ML, had all the authority and power that there was no further room for struggle until the last chapters. There were no risks and losses, nothing was truly on the line because winning was a default. As I've said, I have no qualms with good triumphing over evil, but I missed being on the edge of my seat reading them work towards that satisfying win.
Time skips were utilized lackadaisically and too often. Also, was gonna give it a 6 for the enjoyable premise but another (-1) for the Kihu disrespect. So overall, 5/10.
And that's it, thanks for coming to my ted talk. (⌒▽⌒)
Chapters 75-76 are probably the only chapters I'll come back to here.
I just had to, so here's my personal yapping:
Our FL, most of the time, was too flawless that the implied "flaws" fell flat because she was just written to be this all too perfect and loveable existence in this timeline. I get that she deserves all the best but this makes for an uninteresting story. To add, we could've had a few more chapters dedicated to her friendship with the other cast to build context of her development, but nope.
Moreover, everyone's emotions, purpose, scenes, and actions HEAVILY depended or served only the FL. That's what I feel, makes this monotonous. The author disregarded the better supporting characters and left them underutilized.
Anw, I get that the couple were "destined" but their romance was a tedious read. Scrolling thru their panels together was tiring because the chemistry felt forced. I'm not even assured that Dylan will love his children because we weren't given enough personality development to assume this for the future.
I love happy endings, but the ending was executed weakly and briskly; causing the impact of the positive message of the story to be lost. And the epilogue, sadly only served the two main characters well.
And regrettably, my boi Kihu was simply regarded as collateral damage; used, then thrown on the ground, and stomped on. The pure disrespect to his character, I am speechless.
Gorgeous illustrations but the writing, especially in terms of character building, became a huge miss. The conflicts felt merely decorative; written for the sake of. The FL and ML, had all the authority and power that there was no further room for struggle until the last chapters. There were no risks and losses, nothing was truly on the line because winning was a default. As I've said, I have no qualms with good triumphing over evil, but I missed being on the edge of my seat reading them work towards that satisfying win.
Time skips were utilized lackadaisically and too often. Also, was gonna give it a 6 for the enjoyable premise but another (-1) for the Kihu disrespect. So overall, 5/10.
And that's it, thanks for coming to my ted talk.
(⌒▽⌒)