CUTEEEEEE

Frosche79 September 1, 2024 2:11 pm

But is that all??? Like, the Seme wasn't honest or he didn't even tell the Uke about the misunderstanding between them the first night they got together. He didn't tell him that he was interested in the Uke's powers at first and that he fell harder later on, like honesty bro. That would've made the story longer and their relationship even stronger.

Also, the powers part is a little out of place here. It's also confusing that the Seme didn't like the Uke at first but he was always giddy like a high schooler whenever the Uke makes a move on him. Like he's the one with the feelings.

Confusing and too short, that's all I could comment on this. In any case, it was a good story.

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