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This. I had a hard time differentiating people with black hair and even people with brown (or was it orange) hair. I had to figure out who was who based on context.
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This. I had a hard time differentiating people with black hair and even people with brown (or was it orange) hair. I had to figure out who was who based on context.
This one's good. Just needs tweaking with their dialogues. The story is straight forward but at the same time it's kinda bit confusing but not that confusing. Urgh. The faces of the characters with black hair have similarities too so sometimes i need to guess who is who. Anyway, still a good story for me