Agree, could’ve used those extra unnecessary chapter for more fluff （/TДT)/
I agree, and the ending seemed rushed, they could have reduced Heejae's POV and put more chapters at the end, but I also feel that the author had to reduce the chapters suddenly the ending didn't seem natural, it seems like there should have been another season
I reread this 2 weeks ago and I can’t not agree. It was a bit useless to repeat the earlier parts of the story but his POV in the latter part is so well done and what sets it apart from a lot of similar BLs. We get to see him falling in love in spite of himself. It was essential to the story rising above your average identity confusion story. Of which I have read quite a bit.
I really like his POV too, but see the final rushed this way I feel like maybe it was better reduce the chapters on the pov and give on the final or reduce the parts on game, idk it feels rushed and I'm sad for it
I see what you mean. I love a nice slow burn so yes it’s disappointing when authors rush the ending. I agree that it spent too much time in the game and I wish that the romance was a bit more slowburn and the relationship more fleshed out.
Enjoyed it but...
Am I the only one that felt heejae's POV was unnecessarily long... Especially because it didn't add *that* much to the story (since seyong never rly found out heejae's initial intention) other than revealing that he (heejae) was initially pursuing seyong out of revenge but I felt like they could've covered that in much fewer chapters
It just felt like a repetition of the entire story.