Aight i'm at chap 25 and this feels like a kid's attempt at writing a serious story. It's ...

Chocopops August 30, 2024 2:14 pm

Aight i'm at chap 25 and this feels like a kid's attempt at writing a serious story. It's so dumb idk if it's because i'm still technically at the beginning but so far It's a really bad and predictable. idk if i should go on and give it a chance or just drop it

Responses
    Master Of Unpopular Opinions September 17, 2024 10:35 am

    You're wrong all the way, even in your personal attempt at divination. The plot doesn't have a conclusion, only the romance part of the story has one ...

    Chocopops September 17, 2024 12:54 pm
    You're wrong all the way, even in your personal attempt at divination. The plot doesn't have a conclusion, only the romance part of the story has one ... Master Of Unpopular Opinions

    Nah It's fucking dumb compared to many other stories this is like a child's writing. I don't blame you for liking it though. If my opinion managed to upset you to the point you had to defend the story, then this is probably the most your little brain could handle. For someone called 'master of unpopular opinions' you really should be open to others' opinions too

    Master Of Unpopular Opinions September 17, 2024 1:28 pm
    Nah It's fucking dumb compared to many other stories this is like a child's writing. I don't blame you for liking it though. If my opinion managed to upset you to the point you had to defend the story, then thi... Chocopops

    I'm not defending it, im telling you that it's not even completed, that the story has no conclusion, but if that's what you got from my answer then, 25 chapters is probably the most your little brain could handle.
    For someone called chocopops you certainly aren't as sweet x'D

    Chocopops September 17, 2024 1:54 pm
    I'm not defending it, im telling you that it's not even completed, that the story has no conclusion, but if that's what you got from my answer then, 25 chapters is probably the most your little brain could hand... Master Of Unpopular Opinions

    touché. I like your reply

    Master Of Unpopular Opinions September 17, 2024 4:30 pm
    touché. I like your reply Chocopops

    I wasn't even picking a fight in the first place x')

    Chocopops September 17, 2024 6:38 pm
    I wasn't even picking a fight in the first place x') Master Of Unpopular Opinions

    You're right let's kiss and make up

    Master Of Unpopular Opinions September 17, 2024 7:11 pm
    You're right let's kiss and make up Chocopops

    Yea, let's, BL style.
    *Smooch smooch*
    *Throws your panty away*