Like that's it. It took a couple of punches to get the homophobic denial-gay guy that is obsessed with MC to change his mind?! The MC is no better either but I think it's mostly the authors fault.
There are many low points with heavy emotional reveals in the first part then after one fight it just disappear?????? Idk there was no build up. It just a constant all high info bombing about MC's tragedies that suddenly stop. Ngl imo this was a bit poorly written and the characters are very black and white. Take the brother who protected MC from abusive dad and helped him take absence even when they are struggling with money etc. But because he was homophobic bc he was bullied bc of MC, he now deserve to be alone???? I get that MC prob wants to cut ties bc he thinks the bro hates but, it's weird to me that he didn't notice or undervalue that the bro did protect him from the dad and consented even if reluctantly to get MC take a break from uni. I felt empty after reading this...
Like that's it. It took a couple of punches to get the homophobic denial-gay guy that is obsessed with MC to change his mind?! The MC is no better either but I think it's mostly the authors fault.
There are many low points with heavy emotional reveals in the first part then after one fight it just disappear?????? Idk there was no build up. It just a constant all high info bombing about MC's tragedies that suddenly stop.
Ngl imo this was a bit poorly written and the characters are very black and white. Take the brother who protected MC from abusive dad and helped him take absence even when they are struggling with money etc. But because he was homophobic bc he was bullied bc of MC, he now deserve to be alone???? I get that MC prob wants to cut ties bc he thinks the bro hates but, it's weird to me that he didn't notice or undervalue that the bro did protect him from the dad and consented even if reluctantly to get MC take a break from uni.
I felt empty after reading this...