This whole story is a yellow flag.

One August 27, 2024 2:15 pm

The story is both good and bad, but ultimately feels rushed. The ML pissed me off the most and the author trying to make him a caring man because he knows about periods but let his staff bully his ex fiancee and the fl, and ignored them most of the time. He honestly really didn't even care about his ex-fiancee abuse and suicide, it felt more he was angry someone was trying to come at him then her actually dying. I understand it wasn't an engagement of love, but hey, if someone i knew died, i would still feel a little sorrowful and guilt cause it was partially my fault, and happened at my home . So to me he's a yellow flag disguised as a green flag. The FL I loved how she actually has somewhat of a brain and wasn't a typical naive fl and even she felt more feelings for a women she never met then the actual arranged marriage partner. Now thats a girls girl right there, investigated and got her jusitce The crown prince deserves hell and even worse, and the maids deserve to go along with him. All in all I loved the story for being a different premise with somewhat good writing, but the execution could of been way better, in my opinion. Mainly cause I didn't even come out loving any character except the ex-fiance, Fl, and that male aid by the ml side.

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