i’m sorry but this was so cliche it was cringey

No sir, this wasn't even cliche--because even cliche has a DECENT timeline--THIS does not.

This story didn't even really start to have any sort of actual timeline, or anything happening chronological up until the middle/end. So, the moment the top decided to go home, and the bottom got kidnapped because he wanted to go and see him. I guesss it made sense from there, but yeah, buddy.

Even cliche has a decent timeline. Whether it's something like Beyond Two Souls storyline, or even a chronological order. This shit, certainly does not.