This Story Is Wack

MilkTeaAddict August 26, 2024 1:34 pm

MC needs to grow some balls. One minute, you don't care about ML. Another minute, you go around missing him. It's not even power imbalance at this point, it's just stupidity. It's like going back to an abusive ex then cry about it.

ML's "I've lost the place I can return to" well, no shit. You just r*ped someone, you thought they'd want you WILLINGLY ???

THERE IS NO CHASING ARC

"Is love always this messy" ummm NO. Love don't let you get choked, r*ped, locked up and left.

Story is not bad but not good either. 5/10

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