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BrutallyHon3st August 26, 2024 8:27 am

THE FIGHTING PART IS HARD TO READ. I GET SECOND HAND EMBARRASSMENT WHEN READING LMAOO-

i really wish they're more part of mc and the kray so spice the story more and ml to get a chasing arc or smthg cuz the way mc just go with ml's flow left a teribble taste in my mouth. Its not like that kind of plot change doesn't go well with fall in love when their first meeting.

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    BrutallyHon3st August 26, 2024 8:30 am

    The scene where ml apologised could've seen he's regretting it if he's at least cries. Or begging. Like bro, mc got sa. SA.