I did like the steady almost cold vibe of this, there's almost a distance between the read...

I did like the steady almost cold vibe of this, there's almost a distance between the reader and the characters, like the narrative is keeping you at arms length. It's not passionate or very romantic or sexy, just kind of frank. And at the same time the plot is soooo flimsy... Mc is just trying to live his life but every time he talks to a man, his boyfriend spirals into obsessive controlling behavior and that's the plot for about 30 chapters through the end. No development or progress. Idk it was Soso.