will say i can agree that everything felt rushed. i was kinda confused opening this up and seeing the chapter titled the end and then was like huhh were we not getting an exposition dump like last chapter about his family's blood??? idk that seemed like it was going to lead into something. ik we're getting side stories, so maybe we'll see more stuff about it there but i dont ever think it's a good idea to introduce things that seem like main story elements into ur side stories. not everyone's going to read them and side stories should just be kept as fluff. speaking of i cant wait to see some cute shit for our main pairing there!!
in any case, i think that i will give this story a 7/10. couldve been bumped to a 9 if this story at the very least had ten more chapters. the story's beginning and middle were slow burn, and i think it wouldve been good seeing how the two leads acted as a couple and how they would approach the ml's father. the ml's whole family seemed like they were going to be dealt with next after mc took care of the vampire he hated most, but we didnt get to see whatever bs ml's father had in store.
will say i can agree that everything felt rushed. i was kinda confused opening this up and seeing the chapter titled the end and then was like huhh were we not getting an exposition dump like last chapter about his family's blood??? idk that seemed like it was going to lead into something. ik we're getting side stories, so maybe we'll see more stuff about it there but i dont ever think it's a good idea to introduce things that seem like main story elements into ur side stories. not everyone's going to read them and side stories should just be kept as fluff. speaking of i cant wait to see some cute shit for our main pairing there!!
in any case, i think that i will give this story a 7/10. couldve been bumped to a 9 if this story at the very least had ten more chapters. the story's beginning and middle were slow burn, and i think it wouldve been good seeing how the two leads acted as a couple and how they would approach the ml's father. the ml's whole family seemed like they were going to be dealt with next after mc took care of the vampire he hated most, but we didnt get to see whatever bs ml's father had in store.