This had an interesting premise, but the hookup angle ruined this for me. I get that he thought he would never have anything with Hirose, but sleeping with someone else while claiming to like another person is the biggest turn off for me in a story. Was that really necessary to include in the story?
i mean, it really didn't add up much in the story but it's a pretty realistic thing to happen. most of the people i know have hook ups even if they have someone they like (ofc not if they're already committed)
i mean, it really didn't add up much in the story but it's a pretty realistic thing to happen. most of the people i know have hook ups even if they have someone they like (ofc not if they're already committed) lilacsky13
Maybe it's the cultural difference at play here, but where I am from, that is not common and neither realistic, lol. Especially since MC here was crushing on ML for over 10 years.
This had an interesting premise, but the hookup angle ruined this for me. I get that he thought he would never have anything with Hirose, but sleeping with someone else while claiming to like another person is the biggest turn off for me in a story. Was that really necessary to include in the story?