Badly written ending

Bubbles August 24, 2024 6:28 am

I thought this the first time I read this but now even more so. Top did a 180 in personality in the last 2 chapters and quit. I feel this is kinda convenient. They wanted to end it early instead of doing a long distance ark. Even a time skip would’ve been better. What author just showed us is their relationship doesn’t hold the test of time.

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    Bubbles August 27, 2024 12:36 pm

    People disliking should take the time to comment. I’m open to discussion :/

    hereforthegay1721 August 28, 2024 5:59 am

    I mean idk... I personally felt like it was a good wrap up of the story
    The build up of their relationship was the first part and then the last part was them navigating their love life together
    The drama had depth to it and wasn't easy to resolved but the characters were able to grow as individuals to fight for what they love
    And then the ending might have been breif but for some reason it almost feels like if they did anything more it would feel almost like it was dragging on
    I think that the reason why the author didn't add the time during the ukes trip to Germany up until when the seme comes was because there was no need to since what had to be resolved was and they are happy enough for the story to end as it was.
    Finishing the story with them together in Germany was showing how the seme was choosing the uke over his career and was prioritizing the uke matching up with his character development.
    Anyhow I'm just rambling lmao
    I wasn't gonna say anything but then I thought someone might aswell reply lolヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~

    Bubbles August 28, 2024 1:19 pm
    I mean idk... I personally felt like it was a good wrap up of the storyThe build up of their relationship was the first part and then the last part was them navigating their love life togetherThe drama had dept... hereforthegay1721

    Yeah Xd that was nice of you to reply. I see your point and I know why the author ended it. Also wanted to say that I love the story too it’s only the last 2-3 chapters that I think moved too quick. Owell thanks again (▰˘◡˘▰)

    hereforthegay1721 August 29, 2024 5:32 am
    Yeah Xd that was nice of you to reply. I see your point and I know why the author ended it. Also wanted to say that I love the story too it’s only the last 2-3 chapters that I think moved too quick. Owell tha... Bubbles

    Lol no prob (๑•ㅂ•)و✧