Tripped over the finish line

Dayht August 24, 2024 5:29 am

I didn't mind the pacing much, until the very last 2 chapters. If they had just stretched those last 2 into like 5 or 10 that would have made all the difference.

And how can you just KILL OFF the 2nd ML?! Like WTF you let his b*tchy sister live and kill off the silver hair hottie halfway into the FINAL chapter?!

It's amazing how 2 chapters can ruin an entire story.

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