Honestly I’m usually more critical but this one was not too serious of a story so I won’t dock it on world building when it comes to the alien aspect. I’m kinda dissatisfied with how it ended with the dad. I want that asshole to pay horribly with karma. How he ripped the family picture along with destroying the MC’s house in the end pissed me off. He needs to pay.
I do feel like the other characters lacked a bit. But honestly I quite enjoyed the story despite that. It was a bit of a lighthearted,funny, story with elements of sadness through family trauma. Could it have been better? Yeah. Was it still nice to ready and butterfly inducing? 100%
Honestly I’m usually more critical but this one was not too serious of a story so I won’t dock it on world building when it comes to the alien aspect. I’m kinda dissatisfied with how it ended with the dad. I want that asshole to pay horribly with karma. How he ripped the family picture along with destroying the MC’s house in the end pissed me off. He needs to pay.
I do feel like the other characters lacked a bit. But honestly I quite enjoyed the story despite that. It was a bit of a lighthearted,funny, story with elements of sadness through family trauma. Could it have been better? Yeah. Was it still nice to ready and butterfly inducing? 100%