I really just don't know what the author is trying to convey with these slight weird "atmo...

Spiritual-Yogurt August 22, 2024 3:30 am

I really just don't know what the author is trying to convey with these slight weird "atmosphere" at first I was thinking that okay maybe there is something about the ML that's messing his brain up but now I'm just thinking that the author did in unintentionally or it was nothing serious and was just drawn too much because now nothing indicates whatever that feeling the last few chapters. Im going to hold off any judgement on that part with maybe 4 more chapters because damn rhe author is baiting with those slight awkward atmosphere.

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    sopasoupsoup August 22, 2024 3:41 am

    fr, like whenever they're having a nice romantic moment the ML seems rather off or randomly sighs (which seems hella awkward, like uhh ruins the vibe ig) and it gives the feeling that the ML is hiding something or is not interested in the MC (which we know is not the case); but he def gives some chilly/scary aura whenever he does some shit

    i feel like it either is the author trying to scare us readers off or did it unintentionally like OP said, right now it doesn't seem like they're gonna break up, or anything so i'd say it's unintentional too, but we'll never know until the story finally ends lmao

    also, i hate that their relationship is kinda stuck, and i feel like that contributes to the fact that they have some weird/awkward moments, it seems MC has developed more feelings for the ML but doesn't really take action in them, and both of them lack communication (which is pretty much the reason of all their problems), i just hope they don't end up toxic or anything

    Spiritual-Yogurt August 22, 2024 4:09 am
    fr, like whenever they're having a nice romantic moment the ML seems rather off or randomly sighs (which seems hella awkward, like uhh ruins the vibe ig) and it gives the feeling that the ML is hiding something... sopasoupsoup

    This, I don't know exactly what the author is trying to convey right now. 1st he portrayed the ML as someone who is overly possessive and has this weird vibe that he could go off any second and lock the MC up.

    2nd the author potrayed the MC with conflicting feelings about having too much sex then he was draw like he was really not into in sometimes and just gave in because of the ML. Feels a little too much like gaslighting and uncomfortable. Which went on for a few chapters.

    3rd now the MC is so in love with the ML like everything that needs to be addressed has just went out of the window and the author is creating a new conflict which is im guessing the MC will be jealous next chapter.

    4th they haven't actually addressed the issue of MC's continuously pretending to be an expert in dating and ML's apparent lack knowledge of it.

    The author just kinda dumps these conflicts without actually resolving them. I don't know what the author is trying to do here. Maybe building up some huge misunderstanding then in the end he'll just show a "and we talked for hours about a lot of things" kind of scene.