•Arc 1 Bankrupt actor MC hot older guy ML •Arc 2 ch. 50 Emperor MC general ML •Arc 3...

Ciel August 21, 2024 11:12 pm

•Arc 1 Bankrupt actor MC hot older guy ML
•Arc 2 ch. 50 Emperor MC general ML
•Arc 3 ch. 90 Theatre actor MC city lord ML
•Arc 4 ch. 115 Abused adopted son of female only fam
•Arc 5 ch. 146 Mermaids that can turn human
•Arc 6 ch. 169 Vampire MC human ML
•Arc 7 ch. 208 Concubine MC rebellion leader ML
•Arc 8 ch. 236 Sect master MC loyal guard ML
•Arc 9 ch. 259
•Arc 10 ch. 295 That ended in a sec lol
•Arc 11 ch. 297 Holy bishop MC demon lord ML

I do like it but in classic manhua style something about it feels empty, I think there are a few contributing factors.
Storytelling is lacking n rushed as they try to fit in too much in too few chapters, the focus is only on mc and his relationship with ml so there’s no world building, the plot is repetitive as they use the same forumla in every arc; mc taking revenge and his relationship with ML immediately progressing to the final stage.
It really makes no difference what the setting of each arc is, because they’re going to do the same exact things without sparing their surrounding even a glance.
It’s romantic I get it they’re this power cp, but author should’ve switched it up.
Everything is too predictable hence there’s very lil angst. Arc 2 is by far my fav

Responses
    Natasha August 26, 2024 12:20 pm

    I really like this story, yes it's repetitive but sometimes that what most people like, and for me each worlds is interesting.
    You cannot say that the relationship between ML and MC immediately to the final stage, if you really read the story you will know how they fall in love, why the ML like the MC, the second couple also gives an impact, I still remember them even if it's rare for the author to mention them. The relationship between MC and his brother was the best. All these world are just places for the MC to heal after countless years being punish in hell. You might think this story is too predictable solely because you only focus on each world. Instead, try yo focus on their real world, then you will realize how amazing this story is

    Ciel August 26, 2024 7:15 pm
    I really like this story, yes it's repetitive but sometimes that what most people like, and for me each worlds is interesting.You cannot say that the relationship between ML and MC immediately to the final stag... Natasha

    Most ppl absolutely do not enjoy repetitive stories, you’re simply trying to justify ur poor personal taste by dragging everyone else into it lol. I’m pretty sure you’re either new to the world of comics and haven’t read enough given how you deem this manhua as top quality or ur basing ur opinion solely on the feeling that u got from the novels ending.
    It isn’t bad but it’s very much lacking. And the fact that this system is supposed to heal their souls is no news to me, however that doesn’t take away from the surface level writing.
    If the only thing u care for is oonga boonga romance then sure be my guest, but personally I care about much more than that.
    Every arc is a repeat of the same exact events, the human mind is bound to lose interest.