I didn’t really feel chemistry between the two characters and I think it’s because of the length of the story, nothing was really explained and it seemed like there wasn’t enough length to explain? Like the length of the story and the authors writing didn’t match… like the whole Joshua not picking Lucus bc he doesn’t do romance but I thought in beginning it was bc of his age and none of that was ever explained so I’m sitting here confused for most of the story. Also what happened between the two girls? Or the friend and the boss? I feel a lot of this could have been explained and brought together to make better relationships between all the characters
I didn’t really feel chemistry between the two characters and I think it’s because of the length of the story, nothing was really explained and it seemed like there wasn’t enough length to explain? Like the length of the story and the authors writing didn’t match… like the whole Joshua not picking Lucus bc he doesn’t do romance but I thought in beginning it was bc of his age and none of that was ever explained so I’m sitting here confused for most of the story. Also what happened between the two girls? Or the friend and the boss? I feel a lot of this could have been explained and brought together to make better relationships between all the characters