It’s lowkey cute after the whole blackmail thing, but the first thing that made me raise a brow was when the uke LITERALLY said out loud “my troublesome junior”, making said junior upset, but then gets no consequences for it besides mc avoiding him I know actions speak louder than words, but still
Then the whole love rival thing happens— and that’s fine, I like that it was for the seme instead this time. But when uke talks shit about the love rival and rumors surrounding him, mc REASONABLY defends the love rival bc he’s his friend. Like mc then feels sorry even when he shouldn’t… But even then, spending less time with your bf because of your new friend is something you should be sorry for not that. Get it right bro. Guys it’s not that deep but it’s just the things like that that ruin the quality of this read
It’s lowkey cute after the whole blackmail thing, but the first thing that made me raise a brow was when the uke LITERALLY said out loud “my troublesome junior”, making said junior upset, but then gets no consequences for it besides mc avoiding him I know actions speak louder than words, but still
Then the whole love rival thing happens— and that’s fine, I like that it was for the seme instead this time. But when uke talks shit about the love rival and rumors surrounding him, mc REASONABLY defends the love rival bc he’s his friend. Like mc then feels sorry even when he shouldn’t… But even then, spending less time with your bf because of your new friend is something you should be sorry for not that. Get it right bro. Guys it’s not that deep but it’s just the things like that that ruin the quality of this read