Idk their relationship feels kinda forced/rushed. We haven't seen a single chemistry outsi...

Matsusan August 17, 2024 5:02 pm

Idk their relationship feels kinda forced/rushed. We haven't seen a single chemistry outside their smut scenes bc that's all the scenes they have together. Their one true conversation was that time uke told him his backstory and even that felt like it was cut in half

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    Meh August 18, 2024 10:53 am

    That's probably bc it's literally just 14 chapters It's a short story

    Matsusan August 18, 2024 4:53 pm
    That's probably bc it's literally just 14 chapters It's a short story Meh

    What??? It'll end in the next chapter?? Damn that's sad. Tbh It's still not really an excuse, I've read a lot of short stories and the characters have more chemistry than this. If the author would invest in scenes of them together other than having sex it already would've been better

    Meh August 19, 2024 10:35 am
    What??? It'll end in the next chapter?? Damn that's sad. Tbh It's still not really an excuse, I've read a lot of short stories and the characters have more chemistry than this. If the author would invest in sce... Matsusan

    It's more like a sweet open ending tho, so I guess the author's intention is to leave it to us to imagine that they would cultivate and deepen their relationship after the story