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Chahyun was only the artist for Story of Our Lives, it was written by Sria. And I agree with you.
Ah that explains it then
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Chahyun was only the artist for Story of Our Lives, it was written by Sria. And I agree with you.
Ah that explains it then
The author's writing is rlly weird. Their old story "story of our lives" used to one of my favorites, good plot and 3 dimensional characters. Then my suha came out and it was ok at the start until suha became SO annoying and turned into the innocent dumb bratty bottom type. The whole plot got so dumb and nsfw centered that i dropped it. (+ not to mention the TIRING normalized dub con). Then the side story came out and that redhead who was the villain and a borderline rapist actually gets some real good writing inserted into his characterisation. He gets his whole life lifted upside down, a taste of his own medicine and for once considers that he was a shit person and realizes he doesnt deserve kindness, he has to earn it. That was some phenomenal writing. His reactions, the consequences to his actions, who he became, the closeness he started craving. All very good. Got me thinking the writer changed or something. That ended, now suha is back in the main story and the author STILL doesn't know what to do with him. He makes him suck his boyfriends dick after he repeatedly tells him to stop like that trope is sooo tired. Not to mention what suha went through, the emotional and sexual blackmail. I just feel like if the author wanted to showcase the consequences of that, they should do it with more care, less nsfw, less stupid yaoi non con tropes and less boring misunderstandings. What happened to the writinggg