I read the whole thing and it's not really good. It could have been better. Some things felt off tho: - Francis was very annoyed at Leehyun at the beginning. I don't understand how Francis went from annoyed at Leehyun to liking him. - Leehyun liking Francis even though Francis kicked him, didn't respect his boundaries and threatened and took him against his will to his base in the beginning. Francis also forced Leehyun to become his guide. - I'm surprised no one in the story is protesting against putting someone in a tube. Where have the human rights gone? Only a few people probably knew about the project but still, the fact no one (openly) disagreed with the idea of sacrificing someone o-O
I read the whole thing and it's not really good. It could have been better. Some things felt off tho:
- Francis was very annoyed at Leehyun at the beginning. I don't understand how Francis went from annoyed at Leehyun to liking him.
- Leehyun liking Francis even though Francis kicked him, didn't respect his boundaries and threatened and took him against his will to his base in the beginning. Francis also forced Leehyun to become his guide.
- I'm surprised no one in the story is protesting against putting someone in a tube. Where have the human rights gone? Only a few people probably knew about the project but still, the fact no one (openly) disagreed with the idea of sacrificing someone o-O