the art was pretty and the story had potential but it was just so rushed and the mc felt like an npc he was so bland lol. the main characters never interacted outside of sex or attempted to communicate their feelings even once and when daichi finally confesses it’s after raping osawa. then he proceeds to enter a relationship with rio knowing rio is in love with him and that he doesn’t like him back like tf. i just couldn’t buy the happy ending it felt forced. with a short story like this too much time was spent on the side character of rio and while i found him interesting (more so than the main couple) it took away pages that could’ve been better used fleshing out daichi and osawa as both individuals and how they treat each other in non-sexual situations. but if rio gets a story i will read it for sure.
the art was pretty and the story had potential but it was just so rushed and the mc felt like an npc he was so bland lol. the main characters never interacted outside of sex or attempted to communicate their feelings even once and when daichi finally confesses it’s after raping osawa. then he proceeds to enter a relationship with rio knowing rio is in love with him and that he doesn’t like him back like tf. i just couldn’t buy the happy ending it felt forced. with a short story like this too much time was spent on the side character of rio and while i found him interesting (more so than the main couple) it took away pages that could’ve been better used fleshing out daichi and osawa as both individuals and how they treat each other in non-sexual situations. but if rio gets a story i will read it for sure.