Very unnatural

Nui hooman August 16, 2024 2:45 am

I know this is bl, when most the story are shit and unnatural just to achieve 'the goal'. At least gives some words about how the relationship going if the author doesn't visualize it through panels.

On ch4 they act like super chummy like old friend with no words like "after the incident, we keep contacting each other and the dark guy sometimes come to my house or so" while in previous chapters their interaction is just so so.

Super weird plot and character development, not enjoyable to read for genre 'bl with story'. Some yaoi with less plot felt much better than this one in story delivery. Dropped it for good

Responses
    Shinn August 16, 2024 5:08 pm

    It’s very lazy and inconsistent chara for sure. It’s the dumbest i ever read i think