I would've preferred a story of a single father.

Sain August 15, 2024 11:11 pm

I would've preferred a story of a single father.

Responses
    Mafuyu August 16, 2024 5:18 am

    Same it’s good so far ,but I would prefer if I didn’t have the romance so early, at least put it later on in the story.

    Sain August 17, 2024 2:33 am
    Same it’s good so far ,but I would prefer if I didn’t have the romance so early, at least put it later on in the story. Mafuyu

    Yeah I want to see him struggle at fatherhood, become good at it, develop a close father-son relationship, then it can be like the son wingman's his dad or something. It could've been cute.

    mewth August 19, 2024 11:47 pm

    I actually kinda like this. Got lotta single dad (unrealistic) isekai ehere the kids super easy touch raise. In this one the dad accept that he need help instead force himself did things that almost killed him. Lol. parenting is not a joke. that bundle of 5kgs at most baby need more than an adult to survive(both baby and adult )

    Sabrina August 20, 2024 12:45 am
    Same it’s good so far ,but I would prefer if I didn’t have the romance so early, at least put it later on in the story. Mafuyu

    We all know she probably gonna die sometime later in the story to trigger the Mc's villain arc like any typical demonic mc story

    Sain August 20, 2024 4:10 am
    I actually kinda like this. Got lotta single dad (unrealistic) isekai ehere the kids super easy touch raise. In this one the dad accept that he need help instead force himself did things that almost killed him.... mewth

    Yeah kids aren't easy, but seeing characters struggle then overcome is endearing. I guess what put me off was the whole slave contract thing. Like they meet, later form a slave contract, then later marry. As an audience member this happened a little too quick for my liking plus we knew she is going to be plot point to trigger rage. Like maybe MC flips out accidentally killing her in his demon rampage, MC regrets it, but the son who witnessed it forms hatred towards his demon father vows revenge against him. Like this could happen and for all I know Zeus or Satan could just kill to stir the pot, or a human arm kills her like she's strong but also a liability. Also sry I wrote so much.

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    Mafuyu August 20, 2024 4:20 am
    We all know she probably gonna die sometime later in the story to trigger the Mc's villain arc like any typical demonic mc story Sabrina

    Oh god nooo ,it can’t be this why ,would you tell me this ┗( T﹏T )┛

    Sabrina August 20, 2024 5:18 am
    Oh god nooo ,it can’t be this why ,would you tell me this ┗( T﹏T )┛ Mafuyu

    It's the sad truth for some but it all depends on the author at the very end