well it's mostly smut but the latest chapter shows some character development for the fl at last
It's good asf actually. In a dark twisted way
He's not obsessive he's just a pos
Right??? Its hard to find good stuff thats twisted, but this one does it
There was a short break between chapters so my memory is kinda blurry, but I think he's a 50-50 in being "well-written".
-I have not noted anything that led to his obsession to FL besides lust when they first met
-his backstory should be displayed more vividly, but all I remember is that he was cursed when he was a teen and in return cursed everyone else.
-he seems childish.
-he thought the FL would love him unconditionally, and never asked her for her consent (on turning her into him) and just let her become twisted.
-he's crazy hot in Chapter 1
-there's too much snu snu compared to character development, but FL did get some after she got turned
Actually scratch that, he sounds like a 30/100
yall is this good?? I've tried reading it a couple time, but the fl seemed so naive and dumb. and don't get me wrong, I LOVE an obsessive man but is he well written??