This was a surprisingly good read. The suspense and character growth and even the part whe...

Mochinutz3 August 15, 2024 9:22 am

This was a surprisingly good read. The suspense and character growth and even the part when the top goes through it and beg’s for him back was chef’s kiss. Can someone recc more of the love interest groveling for their person back?

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    Fujodanshi August 17, 2024 3:16 am

    tbh it was rushed.

    Basic Dickhead August 19, 2024 1:34 pm
    tbh it was rushed. Fujodanshi

    How? /gen

    gay4jesus August 19, 2024 3:01 pm
    tbh it was rushed. Fujodanshi

    fr are we reading the same story? There was no chase. it was a light jog at best. ending was absolutely rushed

    Fujodanshi August 19, 2024 6:27 pm
    How? /gen Basic Dickhead

    Well, the redemption arc was too small. And there were way too many unresolved feelings. Moreover, I didn't find the miscommunication from before to be solved either. After chap 70 something, it was all too rushed.

    Fujodanshi August 19, 2024 6:28 pm
    fr are we reading the same story? There was no chase. it was a light jog at best. ending was absolutely rushed gay4jesus

    Ikr.