This has to be one the most gorgeous art I've seen among manhwa this genre but the plot is...

Raekooo August 13, 2024 1:51 pm

This has to be one the most gorgeous art I've seen among manhwa this genre but the plot is getting deceiving
I liked how she was introduced to be at the beginning : mc had everything to be the good ambitious 'girlboss' mc we needed, capable to overcome most of her fears, instead of the annoying fragile inlove ones. It was nice to see how she brushed off Raffaelo and kept her plan her only goal. But the more you progress in the story, even tho so many events are happening, you still feel like nothing is really happening. Everytime you feel like 'That's it, mc is about to do something big' ahahah well no, not really. Same when a event happens, the next chapters directly opens to a new scene wihtout transition (Lady's coming out of age ceremony arrived suddenly during a chapter, just to show mc and her brother dancing and the introduction of bayel's brother in the plot. Nothing else is showed about the ceremony itself, thats a bit disappointing to not get few scenes even just for a filler)

And the romance is so off
Cayena who was so focused on her freedom is stuck with a male lead that doesnt listen when she says 'no it's impossible you're just an ally for me' and that even desire to lock her up aswell. The kiss and naked scene were so out off pocket. My take: story would have been better if Raffaello's feelings were one sided. Yes old Cayena was inlove with him but he ignored her. New Cayena with the past memories would have know how it felt to die having no one caring for you, being left/betray by all the one you cared about in your childhood.
At that point I just wish Bayel to be the real male lead if she has to end up with someone by the end of the story..

It also be nice if we could know more about the true antagonist cuz beside seeing his crazy eyes 'uhuhuhu my precious toy' ahh we got nothing truely interesting about him.

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