I didn't want this story to end! The character development was outstanding, and the plot was intensely captivating. The storytelling was superb. However, I felt that certain key elements, like the reincarnation and its underlying reasons, deserved more attention. The characters should have had the opportunity to explore and discuss these aspects rather than skimming over them.
While it was understandable that Officer Soh prioritized solving the crime immediately after reincarnation, addressing this pivotal event now that they’re moving forward together would add depth. Otherwise, it risks feeling like a narrative shortcut rather than a fully developed storyline.
One intriguing idea is that the author could make a connection between the reincarnation and the animals that were killed. Perhaps the animals, having met their untimely deaths, were responsible for giving our leads the chance to solve the crimes committed against them by granting them the opportunity to be reincarnated. This could be tied to the lore of cats having nine lives, suggesting that these animals used their remaining lives to aid in seeking justice. Such a connection would bridge the gap in this essential plot point. With that addition, this story would undoubtedly be a perfect 10/10.
I didn't want this story to end! The character development was outstanding, and the plot was intensely captivating. The storytelling was superb. However, I felt that certain key elements, like the reincarnation and its underlying reasons, deserved more attention. The characters should have had the opportunity to explore and discuss these aspects rather than skimming over them.
While it was understandable that Officer Soh prioritized solving the crime immediately after reincarnation, addressing this pivotal event now that they’re moving forward together would add depth. Otherwise, it risks feeling like a narrative shortcut rather than a fully developed storyline.
One intriguing idea is that the author could make a connection between the reincarnation and the animals that were killed. Perhaps the animals, having met their untimely deaths, were responsible for giving our leads the chance to solve the crimes committed against them by granting them the opportunity to be reincarnated. This could be tied to the lore of cats having nine lives, suggesting that these animals used their remaining lives to aid in seeking justice. Such a connection would bridge the gap in this essential plot point. With that addition, this story would undoubtedly be a perfect 10/10.