bruh what

levipleasecallmeback August 12, 2024 10:24 pm

this story is messy as hell and not just because of the bad upload at the end. introducing two characters that fast with no build up took away their depth in the story… it rushed two plots and gave us no context or filler on their relationship because we should’ve seen more on their ends how the missing guy is perceived. miro didn’t come off mysterious imo, because he doesn’t even feel attached to the story

Responses
    pinkcatnipples August 17, 2024 3:28 pm

    my brother in christ we are three chapters into said story

    levipleasecallmeback August 17, 2024 5:22 pm
    my brother in christ we are three chapters into said story pinkcatnipples

    yea and? that’s literally my point, three chapters in and it had rushed the storyline and introduced two major characters from miros past without any solid background … no groundwork laid out so the content feels empty

    my brother in christ can we not analyze said story and have different opinions lmao

    mooznnn October 14, 2024 6:51 pm
    yea and? that’s literally my point, three chapters in and it had rushed the storyline and introduced two major characters from miros past without any solid background … no groundwork laid out so the content... levipleasecallmeback

    Chill bro let the author cook

    levipleasecallmeback October 14, 2024 7:52 pm
    Chill bro let the author cook mooznnn

    you would eat shit off a plate if it looked good enough :/

    mooznnn October 15, 2024 2:18 am
    you would eat shit off a plate if it looked good enough :/ levipleasecallmeback

    U bet I would I mean we never know it can be named shit but be smth else