This is decent. Not super awesome but decent. A bit more cleaning up and it's good. Doesn't explain much about the world and the characters but I say it nice. Dialog between characters are good, not choppy and confusing and the world seems interesting.
This is decent. Not super awesome but decent. A bit more cleaning up and it's good. Doesn't explain much about the world and the characters but I say it nice. Dialog between characters are good, not choppy and confusing and the world seems interesting.