This is so fucking good, I wish more plots were so well thought out. They definitely wrote...

ThotChocolate August 11, 2024 3:37 pm

This is so fucking good, I wish more plots were so well thought out. They definitely wrote it all out before even drawing it, the author is both a writer and an artist. There's a DISTINCT difference, there's artists who want to write and writers who want to draw. It takes a lot of time to be able to fully do both. I feel as if this is something they thought out about for a long time, the subtlety yet realness in their emotions. Not everyone is so animated, if anything people truly react more subtle than extreme.

It feels boring to most people because it's slowly building up and actually putting in effort to have a well thought out story. NOT THAT OTHER STORIES PALE IN COMPARISON! There are people who are able to whip up something great without thinking too much about it, but most of the time authors are pressed for time and put out half baked results due to that. Or they're forced to write more than they planned so they have to bs some shit. I am hoping that the rest of the comic stays in being so well planned out, but we'll see.

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    aisha August 11, 2024 5:18 pm

    my thoughts exactly! It's apparent how much effort was put into not only the art but the plot of this story, every dialogue and monologue was written with such moving words, I was actually in awe. Gosh I wish there were more stories that are as well thought out and had effort put into it as much as this NOT THAT OTHER STORIES WEREN'T THOUGHT OUT OR DIDN'T HAVE ANY EFFORT PUT IN

    Bubblegum4U August 11, 2024 11:12 pm

    This is me before I read the raws novel. The potential...

    Ren August 12, 2024 3:36 am
    This is me before I read the raws novel. The potential... Bubblegum4U

    Bestie sameeee

    ThotChocolate August 12, 2024 3:28 pm
    This is me before I read the raws novel. The potential... Bubblegum4U

    NOOOO does it all go to shit? I can imagine a few ways it would but I was hoping it wouldn't.

    ThotChocolate August 12, 2024 3:30 pm
    my thoughts exactly! It's apparent how much effort was put into not only the art but the plot of this story, every dialogue and monologue was written with such moving words, I was actually in awe. Gosh I wish t... aisha

    YESSSS I agree 100%. The thing is, I think it depends on 1) if it's based off of a novel (if it's a comic). 2) If not, how much time went into planning the comic/story. 3) The determination of an author. If an author is not determined to write something well thought out and just have fun, ofc it won't be something like this (or many other comics I've read). Are lighthearted and jokesy comics fun? OFC when they're meant to be that way, I just wish even more were like this.

    Bubblegum4U August 12, 2024 3:44 pm
    NOOOO does it all go to shit? I can imagine a few ways it would but I was hoping it wouldn't. ThotChocolate

    It's like Betrayal of Dignity tbh. I like both the Mcs and thier story at first then it all fell off because of one element of the story: the ml

    ThotChocolate August 12, 2024 3:50 pm
    It's like Betrayal of Dignity tbh. I like both the Mcs and thier story at first then it all fell off because of one element of the story: the ml Bubblegum4U

    Ofc, ugh I kinda liked the ML but at the same time he's too cautious and callous. It's understandable being in like for the throne, but tbh I wish he wasn't the true ML. Not only because of his demeanor but also his age. It'd be better if they had a professional or friendly relationship rather than anything sexual or romantic.

    aisha August 13, 2024 8:11 am
    It's like Betrayal of Dignity tbh. I like both the Mcs and thier story at first then it all fell off because of one element of the story: the ml Bubblegum4U

    nooo i hope this story will still somewhat be bearable and not let the plot go to waste ackk