Hm. Rereading this after reading some of Killing Stalking just makes this worse. It wants to be killing stalking so bad yet it doesn't understand why KS works and what makes the characters psychologically interesting. It's not invested in its characters like that and it just makes them flat & not any reason to read further. Stripping down the basic elements just to make torture porn that isn't even appealing. Literally why does this exist
Hm. Rereading this after reading some of Killing Stalking just makes this worse. It wants to be killing stalking so bad yet it doesn't understand why KS works and what makes the characters psychologically interesting. It's not invested in its characters like that and it just makes them flat & not any reason to read further. Stripping down the basic elements just to make torture porn that isn't even appealing. Literally why does this exist