so unfortunate,,

I didn't like their beginning and how rushed the "love" is, and how there's no reason for us to believe they even like each other besides the horniness they feel,, until the lion guy says he's in love and like. no. first off, you were in love with his image and performance, and we never get to actually see much more than that. AND IT'S A FUCKING SHAME. cause the setting is interesting, the characters are interesting and GORGEUS LIKE DAMN and they're actually fucking adorable after they get together (and a tiny bit before that). the fact that you only needed to change a few things and add some others to make this story actually amazing, bothers me the most. for example, their first time together, instead of making the lion dude do what he does, make yoru take the first steps to satisfy the costumer and show how it bothers the lion dude but it also pains him that he just can't make the other stop etc. and after that we ACTUALLY see them learn more about each other outside of sex. instead of that we get a I'll fuck you roughly constantly and then tell you it was all because I love you oh so very much. be for real. oh but he's so kind. WHERE. don't just tell us that, show it. if he's so kind, why are the dudes from the beginning still in hell (was the newspaper about them? I've no idea). why does he force yoru constantly. but also, why are the servants saying that? what happened with them for them to believe that? SHOW US. and if it's supposed to be more in shadow, at least tease it more.
also,, just a side thing but, does he dance with or without music??

I don't even know how many stars to give it, but I'll put probably one more than it should because the extras (especially the orange one) are adorable,, and the art and characters are divine.
the fact that you can see how much the author likes these characters and this is the result,, the little notes on some of the drawings about the characters were more interesting than the whole story, I'm sorry.