The plot was way too good for it to be a short story. Honestly this story feels like the author just wanted to make a simple silly story with maybe 7-8 chapters but ended up developing it way more than they thought they would and then decided to end it at an "acceptable" point. SIGH, there's so many plot devices and details that could be worked with but idk, maybe the author ran out of fuel
The plot was way too good for it to be a short story. Honestly this story feels like the author just wanted to make a simple silly story with maybe 7-8 chapters but ended up developing it way more than they thought they would and then decided to end it at an "acceptable" point. SIGH, there's so many plot devices and details that could be worked with but idk, maybe the author ran out of fuel