It’s giving woman written by a man in a big way. Very much catered to male fantasies and...

Witchery August 5, 2024 11:53 pm

It’s giving woman written by a man in a big way. Very much catered to male fantasies and patriarchal ideals. He basically exploits her in her time of need while pretending to help. He capitalizes on her kidnapping, financial hardship, and family medical crisis to get her to agree to be his baby factory/sex doll for embryos made with his deceased wife, but his obvious selfishness and lack of genuine care for her well being are fine because he lets her live in luxury, and she caught feelings, thinks he’s hot, and is happy to alleviate his sadness “even a little bit” by acting as his live in sex doll and selfless tradwife…

Responses
    chocobuun September 4, 2024 5:14 am

    Yeah you should definitely look at the author’s insta discussing the story. She clarifies he isn’t even the set the ML and that this is just the backstory to the actual main story. This is all flashbacks and not current time

    Witchery September 4, 2024 7:38 am

    That’s fine and all, but I’m reading the story in real time without extra knowledge of the author’s intentions or any plot spoilers. It reads like a permissive story that tries to gloss over how shitty he is, whether he’s the endgame ml or not

    chocobuun September 4, 2024 9:23 am
    That’s fine and all, but I’m reading the story in real time without extra knowledge of the author’s intentions or any plot spoilers. It reads like a permissive story that tries to gloss over how shitty he... Witchery

    But the point is, it isn’t glossing over how shitty he is lol. It’s showing the parts clearly to show how shitty he is, and why the FL would want to move on. I don’t know how you’d get to that conclusion unless you saw the ending where he’s forgiven and accepted or you just project other stories with similar plots, assuming it will be the exact same case as this one. The author is very aware of such plots and from what I’ve seen, she likes to develop the characters thoroughly.

    Trinitymoon October 19, 2024 9:10 pm
    But the point is, it isn’t glossing over how shitty he is lol. It’s showing the parts clearly to show how shitty he is, and why the FL would want to move on. I don’t know how you’d get to that conclusio... chocobuun

    Yo y u keep defending this story under people comments. If they not feeling it they not feeling . You extra defensive, chill your just assuming things the op never said.

    chocobuun October 19, 2024 10:40 pm
    Yo y u keep defending this story under people comments. If they not feeling it they not feeling . You extra defensive, chill your just assuming things the op never said. Trinitymoon

    And why do you care about what other people are talking about lmfao. Reading is essential, please try it out again and maybe you’ll see that I’m giving more info about the author’s intent. Not talking about how much I hate or love the story. You didn’t even understand anything I said LOLLL

    Witchery October 20, 2024 12:16 am

    I get what you’re saying about the author’s intentions, but my point was that the story doesn’t actually read that way. And it exists as an independent unit, so if the author felt that the actual art and storyline were insufficient to convey the meaning of their story they should have included the extra context with the chapters.

    chocobuun October 20, 2024 12:39 am
    I get what you’re saying about the author’s intentions, but my point was that the story doesn’t actually read that way. And it exists as an independent unit, so if the author felt that the actual art and ... Witchery

    The author didn’t include it because that context is pretty much spoilers, so only for people that want to know who is the lead. She provides spoilers on her account for reader’s who really want to know and if they want to continue reading knowing who the male lead is.

    I’m just reassuring anyone that chances are, the dark haired guy may not be the male lead. And it isn’t supporting the toxic ML trope. It’s likely leading up to the set up of the story is basically like a book series. The first arc/volume being the FL’s past, trauma, and showing the events leading up to why she is who she is now. The second arc/volume is the current time, moving on from the painful past. Cause without showing the painful part, no reader is going to understand the stuff she went through or would think it’s a big deal

    Witchery October 20, 2024 12:45 am

    I’m glad if that’s the case, but if the story doesn’t read right without spoilers, it means there are some conceptual problems

    Trinitymoon October 20, 2024 1:11 pm
    And why do you care about what other people are talking about lmfao. Reading is essential, please try it out again and maybe you’ll see that I’m giving more info about the author’s intent. Not talking abo... chocobuun

    No you're spoiling the story because you think that'll make people like it better. Nobody needs hints that the author is giving. We're reading the story as it is now and it's a 2/5.

    Trinitymoon October 20, 2024 1:13 pm
    The author didn’t include it because that context is pretty much spoilers, so only for people that want to know who is the lead. She provides spoilers on her account for reader’s who really want to know and... chocobuun

    Writing paragraphs for this book you have to be the author or u know them smh

    chocobuun October 20, 2024 2:48 pm
    Writing paragraphs for this book you have to be the author or u know them smh Trinitymoon

    LMFAOOO you cannot seriously be this pressed because I’m giving more info. If you wanna bitch about a story, be my guest- Idgaf anyone hating the story. All I’m doing is clarifying stuff people didn’t know and assumptions. My replies were never about people’s opinions, it was about adding info that they can then see if they want to continue reading or not. I never even disagreed with anyone, I just corrected what people thought the author’s intent was.

    Make your own complaints in your comment instead of whining about shit that others didn’t have any issue with. Take the stick outta your ass and carry on with your day. It’s saying something when you have more of a problem than the people I replied to LOL
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    chocobuun October 20, 2024 2:56 pm
    Writing paragraphs for this book you have to be the author or u know them smh Trinitymoon

    I’m sorry are you incapable of writing more than two sentences?? Using the “writing paragraphs” insult is an easy way to show how your brain can’t comprehend past a certain limit, or you think everything is too big to read LOL. Do you enjoy indirectly telling people you don’t like that they can write more than you?
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    You seem to get triggered and offended easily, no one even came at you for your opinion, you just wanted to be involved where no one needed your extra input.

    Trinitymoon October 21, 2024 1:56 pm

    You're so mad that you're cussing

    Witchery October 21, 2024 3:05 pm

    Yeah, seems like Trinitymoon hit the nail on the head

    chocobuun October 21, 2024 3:10 pm
    You're so mad that you're cussing Trinitymoon

    Are you 5? LMFAO do you think you can only cuss when you’re mad?

    But anyways, thank you for showing me you ran out of things to say.

    Trinitymoon October 22, 2024 10:50 am
    Are you 5? LMFAO do you think you can only cuss when you’re mad?But anyways, thank you for showing me you ran out of things to say. chocobuun

    I said ur projecting because the only one who seems triggered and easily offended is u choco. The rest of my comment got cut off and ur super extra .

    chocobuun October 22, 2024 11:05 am
    I said ur projecting because the only one who seems triggered and easily offended is u choco. The rest of my comment got cut off and ur super extra . Trinitymoon

    You started and replied to me because you were so bothered by me talking to other people lmao. All your comments just show you didn’t actually care about anything I said, you were just a troll who was bored and wanted someone to talk to
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    Anyways I said everything I wanted. You should go find some friends to whine to next time! I can’t imagine you acting like this every time anyone wants to give more info. You started getting sooo offended thinking ppl cared about your opinion enough to change it.

    Trinitymoon October 22, 2024 11:05 am
    Are you 5? LMFAO do you think you can only cuss when you’re mad?But anyways, thank you for showing me you ran out of things to say. chocobuun

    I also salute u sir for not writing another 4 paragraphs over explaining and repeating what u said 6 answers ago. I'm so proud of u keep up the good work.
    Also a 5yr def could have written 10% of this then their 14yr sis wrote the other 90.

    Trinitymoon October 22, 2024 11:10 am

    I'm also going to stop replying because the only thing u were right about is this being under someone else's post. Blowing up their nots is kinda rude, my bad Witchery.