the art is pretty the story is cute the angst hit like shit i had a good cry thank you but...

jistardust August 4, 2024 7:14 pm

the art is pretty the story is cute the angst hit like shit i had a good cry thank you but i can't help but think that it was a bit rushed at the end and what was the point of adding a third character it felt unnecessary and at some point i thought he's going to have his own second story?? the epilogue chaps are basically them being horny (and their cute ass of course) which i'm okay with but i lowkey dislike it when authors do this to stories that're originally "tamed" it's like they're yaoi-fying the story like it's fine even without the explicit smut the story is still good enough

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    Mortal August 8, 2024 8:42 pm

    Ikr

    specird August 8, 2024 11:33 pm

    yihyeon? he does have his own story. its a novel.

    jistardust August 9, 2024 12:51 am
    yihyeon? he does have his own story. its a novel. specird

    as someone who only read the manhwa and didn't know this is adapted from a novel his character felt very shallow compared to the ml and the mc it's like he was added for the sake of introducing a potential threat to the main couple while he's not playing into it either (escaping from ml when sensing his jealousy) it made me feel confused tbh ig the artist of this work didn't know how to balance between main and secondary characters even if the latter have their own story it doesn't make sense to almost treat them like a shadow when partaking in events