OHHHH

velocity August 4, 2024 2:32 pm

oh my this was sooo good. everything was perfect, the sadistic seme, the pretty yet helpless uke, the rape, the manipulation, the forced threesome, the mind break (induced by some stimulating drug but still). the only flaw is that it’s definitely too short. it had some great longer story potential to have some interesting world building and absolutely fucked up relationship between seme and uke. i need more stories like this

Responses
    피의 August 5, 2024 6:04 am

    Exactly it was just perfect but sooo short omg I come back to this every now and then just thinking how it would be if it was longer

    velocity August 5, 2024 6:22 am
    Exactly it was just perfect but sooo short omg I come back to this every now and then just thinking how it would be if it was longer 피의

    i read the q&a with the author on the official publishing site and they said that this story was just a way to “reset” their mind before they started working on a new series and that they don’t plan to write anything else about the military right now… but they also said that they planned a different ending but to pull it off they would’ve needed 4 more chapters… we were robbed

    nvatie August 12, 2024 4:29 pm

    ur a hupersezusl arent u

    velocity August 12, 2024 6:12 pm
    ur a hupersezusl arent u nvatie

    if you meant hypersexual then idk how that has to do anything with me enjoying some good rape in a story

    nvatie August 12, 2024 7:46 pm
    if you meant hypersexual then idk how that has to do anything with me enjoying some good rape in a story velocity

    enjoying a rape story is not normal btw but alot of hypersexual who have maybe been groomed or had access to Internet at a young age enjoy this

    velocity August 12, 2024 8:05 pm
    enjoying a rape story is not normal btw but alot of hypersexual who have maybe been groomed or had access to Internet at a young age enjoy this nvatie

    thanks for diagnosing me through the internet mr armchair psychologist but none of this is true i just like fictional rape

    nvatie August 12, 2024 10:13 pm
    thanks for diagnosing me through the internet mr armchair psychologist but none of this is true i just like fictional rape velocity

    not rly disproving my point but jolly day young lad

    피의 August 13, 2024 3:48 am
    thanks for diagnosing me through the internet mr armchair psychologist but none of this is true i just like fictional rape velocity

    LMAO literally like this is just a good ass story with some good ass art

    chacha31 August 21, 2024 4:26 pm
    thanks for diagnosing me through the internet mr armchair psychologist but none of this is true i just like fictional rape velocity

    you're just sick.

    Pewp August 26, 2024 3:14 am

    oh!?(⊙…⊙ )

    Tsunmimi October 1, 2024 12:18 pm
    if you meant hypersexual then idk how that has to do anything with me enjoying some good rape in a story velocity

    Yo the words “enjoying” “good rape” should not be used in any sentence at all, doesn’t matter if it’s a fictional story or not, and these is no such thing as “a good rape story”, what the what!!!!!!

    nvatie October 5, 2024 6:47 pm
    Yo the words “enjoying” “good rape” should not be used in any sentence at all, doesn’t matter if it’s a fictional story or not, and these is no such thing as “a good rape story”, what the what!!... Tsunmimi

    right..