4/10 man ( the 4 points are for having no SA, the top being unproblematic, and the queen)
TLDR; Usually love Moscareto's stories and characters but this one was NOT a vibe. MC had the personality of a wet paper towel and his character didn't have any dimensionality. ML was meh. Story was inconsistent and ideas fragmented, some parts were extremely realistic and others were unbelievable.
I wanted to like this so bad bc I love Moscareto and the art of this story is top, which is the only reason I read the whole thing, usually I drop midway if I don't like the story as much as I hated this one. Bc it's Moscareto I just kept praying it would get better but it just NEVER did
Like MC cries at every single thing, he didn't even feel 1 dimensional, he just felt invisible. I think I knew more about Jung's personality than I did the MCs. I get being emotional and traumatized but I thought that as the story progressed and he became more relaxed, slowly we would start seeing the layers in his personality but NOPE, how would we see any if there are none (╯°Д °)╯╧╧ I don't hate pushover characters (sure I get annoyed at them but no hate), but this character was so annoying, he had no traits except crying and loving the prince ig. I don't NEED a strong bottom but at the very least they should have some personality . The queen who got introduced like in the last quarter of the story had more character than either of the characters and unfortunately was the only one I was rooting for. The ML had a 2D personality bc he showed some personality traits and explained the reasoning behind his actions throughout the story. Although his thoughts felt kinda fragmented in the middle (tbh I genuinely couldn't tell whether he trusted the MC or not until the whole thing with the queen) I thought that he was a typical green flag top, nothing special but hey if this story had a bottom who had an actual personality, it could've worked!
I couldn't understand the stuff about the omega shit, like is he an omega or NAH??? by the end of the story is he a normal person??? Like what is this storytelling!?!??!?! I was also extremely annoyed with how they had to make the treatment of the bottom and the comments directed towards him so realistic later on but they didn't do the same for the outcome of his circumstances. Like ok we all see what's happening to Markle rn right? U think ANYONE in a royal fam would sit still if someone with such a weak personality who had a panic attack on tv, is a man, and who has this type of background married the royal prince. Yall the public would be the LEAST of their worries, the prince would have been disowned and maybe bottom would've been murdered, if not by him then by his dad and bro. He's still a prince, doesnt matter whether he displays the traits. At least Megan and Harry had some type of dollars and fame to be able to leave, these two have jack. If you're gonna make the reporters comments and his treatment realistic, at least follow thru. Also why did the ML like the MC? I get why the MC would bc this is the first person who's acc treated him with respect since his captivity but why the ML. Honestly it seemed like the ML liked him from the beginning bc of how oddly their first meeting was portrayed but I still don't understand why. Ig it's bc of how innocent and clueless he is?? But why does he like this cluelessness and lack of knowledge sm??
Anyways, usually I don't write reviews but this story irritated me sm
4/10 man ( the 4 points are for having no SA, the top being unproblematic, and the queen)
TLDR; Usually love Moscareto's stories and characters but this one was NOT a vibe. MC had the personality of a wet paper towel and his character didn't have any dimensionality. ML was meh. Story was inconsistent and ideas fragmented, some parts were extremely realistic and others were unbelievable.
I wanted to like this so bad bc I love Moscareto and the art of this story is top, which is the only reason I read the whole thing, usually I drop midway if I don't like the story as much as I hated this one. Bc it's Moscareto I just kept praying it would get better but it just NEVER did
Like MC cries at every single thing, he didn't even feel 1 dimensional, he just felt invisible. I think I knew more about Jung's personality than I did the MCs. I get being emotional and traumatized but I thought that as the story progressed and he became more relaxed, slowly we would start seeing the layers in his personality but NOPE, how would we see any if there are none (╯°Д °)╯╧╧ I don't hate pushover characters (sure I get annoyed at them but no hate), but this character was so annoying, he had no traits except crying and loving the prince ig. I don't NEED a strong bottom but at the very least they should have some personality . The queen who got introduced like in the last quarter of the story had more character than either of the characters and unfortunately was the only one I was rooting for. The ML had a 2D personality bc he showed some personality traits and explained the reasoning behind his actions throughout the story. Although his thoughts felt kinda fragmented in the middle (tbh I genuinely couldn't tell whether he trusted the MC or not until the whole thing with the queen) I thought that he was a typical green flag top, nothing special but hey if this story had a bottom who had an actual personality, it could've worked!
I couldn't understand the stuff about the omega shit, like is he an omega or NAH??? by the end of the story is he a normal person??? Like what is this storytelling!?!??!?! I was also extremely annoyed with how they had to make the treatment of the bottom and the comments directed towards him so realistic later on but they didn't do the same for the outcome of his circumstances. Like ok we all see what's happening to Markle rn right? U think ANYONE in a royal fam would sit still if someone with such a weak personality who had a panic attack on tv, is a man, and who has this type of background married the royal prince. Yall the public would be the LEAST of their worries, the prince would have been disowned and maybe bottom would've been murdered, if not by him then by his dad and bro. He's still a prince, doesnt matter whether he displays the traits. At least Megan and Harry had some type of dollars and fame to be able to leave, these two have jack. If you're gonna make the reporters comments and his treatment realistic, at least follow thru. Also why did the ML like the MC? I get why the MC would bc this is the first person who's acc treated him with respect since his captivity but why the ML. Honestly it seemed like the ML liked him from the beginning bc of how oddly their first meeting was portrayed but I still don't understand why. Ig it's bc of how innocent and clueless he is?? But why does he like this cluelessness and lack of knowledge sm??
Anyways, usually I don't write reviews but this story irritated me sm