Sighs…plot where are you?

RoguePhoenix August 4, 2024 4:33 am

Don’t get me wrong seeing the dads going undercover was hilarious. I like the kids I do but I wanna know more about the bigger story. Her powers seem to be a big key factor but we don’t know how or why. Plus we still have the family conflict with her aunt and cousins that need to be handled. And I WANT MORE GRANDPA!

I get that you need to lay the foundation for the friendships and love triangle but you already did and is just dragging it out. If she is gonna stay at the estate, I wanna see her lessons or self growth. I wanna see her bond with her father more.

I love this story I truly do. I just wish this didn’t happen so often.

Responses
    Penguin127 August 4, 2024 6:53 am

    True. Im enjoying this. I really am. I normally find these types of stories boring, but i wish there was more meaning to everything instead of fluff

    Aki August 4, 2024 9:29 am

    I'm sure that the time they are spending with each other would feel natural, if we got the whole packet at once and not each chapter with time in between T^T
    And each time this gets and upload, I say to myself to not open the next chapter, but here I am again haha

    666titania August 4, 2024 9:41 am

    I honestly think this is much better instead of rushing things. Normally similar stories like this have the MC regress then actively revenge to her enemies like framing them or building their power both in skills & connections. But those kind of stories rush things and when they add romance it's like forced cuz there aren't enough background for the love interest. Meanwhile in this story the MC and love interest have past childhood before they enter the romance route.

    Penguin127 August 4, 2024 10:03 am
    I honestly think this is much better instead of rushing things. Normally similar stories like this have the MC regress then actively revenge to her enemies like framing them or building their power both in skil... 666titania

    I dont think they meant they wanted this to be like those stories. I think they just wanted to know more about other characters rather than build on romance so early in her life. Personally i would like to see her character build more as well as what her powers mean and such. Its still a cute story anyways. Just voicing opinions for fun