I’m curious, what did you think could be an example of an alternative?
I thought that the Mac is crazy, but I didn’t really came up with alternatives
Honestly to me the Mc's actions just seems unrealistic because breaking up with his bf seems like a valid action at the start but from the time that he was confined he should've realized that trying to break up with him wouldn't work. From there he could've done literally anything else whether it was to make an excuse for his actions or smth else to continue the story but instead his actions keep on repeating and he does the same things over and over again.
Honestly that could be excused if the reasoning behind it was that even tho he knows that he should leave his bf he doesn't want to so he tries to make himself feel like he's trying to get away but couldn't by making those pitiful attempts to leave but none of that is really discussed throughout the story so it just seems like a repeating process.
I'm just rambling atp but I honestly love the concept and It's a decent read but just not good enough to be one where I can actually think about it a lot ╮(￣▽￣)╭
This had potential to be a really good story tbh but the reasoning behind the MC's actions isn't really that reasonable and has a lot of loopholes. The MC could've done so many other things instead of doing whatever he's doing rn and keep on continuing a cycle