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Despite all these the story is good 9 or 8 out of 10
If you disregard the scenes with the red head
Genuinely those scenes just took us to a zigzag complicated road to the finish line when there's a perfect good multiple straight roads to the finish line (and that zigzag road did not make it a better choice of road)
The red head is so poorly written in on the 2nd time she showed up that it feels forced, that even if you dont read the scenarios where she's showed up again the story would still feel natural if you skipped her revenge scenes, I can't even get mad at her as a character since she lacked so much character she didn't even seemed human nor relatable in any way
If they just kept the Ferdinand brother as the main villain the story could've just went for ML lost memories -> FL attempts to runaway due to ML growing unstable personality -> runaway attempt failed so asked for help from the villain -> runaway success using the doppelganger to die from carriage accident -> same fucking outcome without the red head getting forced in on any scenes