Not really feeling this

Maidie July 30, 2024 1:53 pm

Somehow this is really... bland? The story isn't really good, feels like the author is trying to write a story like Netkama Punch but it's kind of childish.
I know they're in highschool, but MC is embarrassed that ML is standing too close? In game?? Or that he's staring... In game? Like sorry but that's so silly.
Maybe it's the twinkified MC bothering me the most.

Responses
    Towana July 30, 2024 5:45 pm

    This is one of their earlier works (around 2015-2016). Netkama Punch is around 2021, about 5 or so years later.
    So it's understandable.

    Maidie July 30, 2024 8:34 pm
    This is one of their earlier works (around 2015-2016). Netkama Punch is around 2021, about 5 or so years later.So it's understandable. Towana

    Ooooh, that makes sense!

    jo ^^ August 11, 2024 2:17 pm

    theyre not in highschool…? (which makes their behavior seem even worse but im confused where u got that from)

    bruce August 15, 2024 6:24 pm
    theyre not in highschool…? (which makes their behavior seem even worse but im confused where u got that from) jo ^^

    i assume it's because no exact age is specified as of rn, and all we know is the mc is studying for something. though it mentions he's studying for a college standardized test? or smth at one point, so i wouldve assumed college more than hs lol

    other people in the comments have also being saying highschool so they mightve gotten it from that too