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I agree. Its okayish but considering how conflicted and detailed fl's mind is, you expect to see the same diligence for our ml. Especially since he must also have same kind of messed up and conflicted train of thoughts
i think the biggest problem of this story is the lack of insight into mag's thoughts. like i have no idea how he feels about her. clearly there's obsession but i don't understand the rest of it and so i can't care as much as i wanted to.