I've read the main story and I can say that the author really improved with their writing,...

Eyyyy July 29, 2024 6:45 pm

I've read the main story and I can say that the author really improved with their writing, particularly thr progression of the character's relationship and each of their development.

The chemistry is so good. I like that we get to see both POVs of how much they like each other and how much they're holding back to like each other. We can see the distinction between characters ages but Jin doesn't act too young. He acts mature enough for his age. The maturity with a slight tinge of immaturity plays well with Hanjun's matured but overthinks too much thinking.

The slow progression from Jin falling to Hanjun rejecting him to Jin trying to move on but still likes Hanjun to Hanjun realizing he likes Jin is just so good. I would love the chasing to be much longer in my opinion because Jin is worth that much .

It's making me like this story more than the main.

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