sooo. The plot has real potential, it could have been soo great but..... ITS SOO DRYYYYY, HE HAS NO PERSONALITY AND ALL HES LITERALLY LIKE A SLICE OF BREAD!!!! If they let's say put the great estate developer's Mc in this it's book would immediately be a 5/5 star but it has no flavor. They build such a great plot just for it to be ruined by the blandness of its characters. Cuz if they stand for nothing what will they fall for.
sooo. The plot has real potential, it could have been soo great but..... ITS SOO DRYYYYY, HE HAS NO PERSONALITY AND ALL HES LITERALLY LIKE A SLICE OF BREAD!!!! If they let's say put the great estate developer's Mc in this it's book would immediately be a 5/5 star but it has no flavor. They build such a great plot just for it to be ruined by the blandness of its characters.
Cuz if they stand for nothing what will they fall for.