tbh tho what did you want her to do? shes a maid girl and there was a room full of men? dhe doesnt know who her killer is, so shes waiting for him to come out to see who planned it. Id like to see how strong you are after you lose everything you have so you dont get killed again
this is so real thanks for this
no problem i hate everyone bashkg the Fl when realistically they would do the same
This sounds more like a letter to yourself. Damn chill out get a grip, its for the fucking plot☠ but if you count this as damsel in distress plot then idk what you'd say if you were to really see the real one. Or maybe you already did from personal experiences thats why seeing someone you deemed incapable made you this cynical.
Drop this. Useless damsel in distress. Weak MC.
All talk but no plans. Weak MC have no brains. Weak writer too because what the fuck do you mean you need the culprit to show themselves to confirm its a planned murder??? Bitch you died hundreds of times ARE THOSE NOT ENOUGH PROOFS someone was killing you??
Why does ML has to do everything and I mean physically everything by saving MC. Is her only weapon her mouth? And being an emotional burden? Fucking do something instead of acting like you’re tough when you’re weak without a man saving your ass