Thank you for taking the time to make these notes! I strive to improve.
I made the cousin line because most of the audience isn’t aware of the family relationship between certain characters. Such as Dr. Caleb being related to Prince Raman. I didn’t have a line pointed between Durant and Owen and I still got several questions if they are related. People of many other languages do read the scans so I try not to leave anything out, to be solved through context clues. It’s already tough enough to have things translated from English to their native languages.
The enemy line is a separate map? Like a separate map for only friends vs enemies? I do see that the map is congested. It is a network of people-heavy series. Would making two different maps would confuse people…. Would making the enemy’s line a maroon or deeper red on the same map help, maybe?
Thank you in advance!
Kinard children? I am unsure what this means. If you are talking about the two people below Kinard's photo on the line map, those are his parents. Blue means marriage partners and purple line means their children. I had to place his parents downwards because of the spacing. But I'd be happy to answer any questions.
Hello everyone. We’ve made it to chapter 100!! As a special gift, I finally made a character list/ map to make this series easier to digest. Let me know if you have questions, concerns, or comments. I will most likely have to fix or add certain things as the series progresses. Should I add ages too?? Enjoy~