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LMFAO i love this and i completely agree w your thoughts on the side stories like atp don’t even bother with the art they could’ve made an authors note just explaining everything since that’s exactly what it seemed like and i think hayan truly was just some random ass girl the author threw in so there would be a love interest that yoojin could end up with (bc it sure as hell wasn’t gonna be gyuhwool) to really top off the happy ending
i don’t think i’ve ever read a webtoon as bad as this one. it’s so stupid and nonsensical it’s actually funny. it’s an equivalent of a wattpad story written by an edgy 14 year old who thought they just had the best idea in the world and no one had ever written anything as good as this. the plot was ass, the characters were ass, the plot twists were ass, the sex scenes were ass, the artstyle was ass. the only way to improve this story is to fucking delete it altogether. complete waste of time. and the pure exposition in the extra chapters felt as if i was reading author’s personal notes about this story, but they didn’t know how to convey this information in any way so they just copy pasted it into the actual webtoon. absolutely phenomenal storytelling, especially the part when the mc tells the reader that even though he lost his memory twice, he still remained gay, and that’s precisely why he got a girlfriend. i refuse to believe anything in story was written seriously.
also, with the amount of direct explanations we’re given at the end, no one mentions who the fuck that blond chick actually is. it’s kind of implied by the psycho guy that she’s that blonde guy from the mc’s high school years, but at the same time everyone says he died and neither the characters nor the story itself ever denies it. so who the fuck was she? no one knows, probably not even the author themself. the psycho guy told the mc that he decided to kidnap only the people who made the mc’s life a “living hell”, and then there’s this random ass girl whom he keeps in one of his rooms and it’s never even explained.
anyway, i think that the fact that this story went through all those editors at l*zh*n, got accepted and then fucking published on a website where you have to pay real, hard earned money for each chapter, serves as a good reminder that no matter how stupid you think your idea is, it’s still probably better than this one. so go for it, write that silly little story of yours and make your dreams come true. if this garbage right here got published, then literally anything can.